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Elena,young bright women who just become a lawyer.She,s going to start her curier path at district attorney office in Denose city while staying with her sister.
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If you plan to continue this or anything that involves writing, I would strongly recommend finding someone to correct the spelling, vocabulary, grammar and punctuation. For this comic only I have made a few corrections:
Page 1
This is Joe, a postman of the Denose city suburbs who is in his sixties and ready to retire. not, This is Jo.Postman of the Denose city suburbs area.Who just around his sixties for his retirement.
Page 2
hags, not hag,s
Page 4
dog is mocking, not dog mocking
Page 5
I'll show you, not I show you
Page 9
I swear to God, not I swore to god.
Page 10
there are a few, not their is few.
housewives, not housewife's
Page 11
broads, not broad.
Mrs, not Miss.
Page 12
I would do it in a heartbeat, not I will do with one heartbeat.
Page 13
door, not doorstep.
serving, not serve.
she would like, not she like.
Page 14
Knock, not Knok.
...is how a prick like Robertson can get such a beautiful woman, not is how can prick like Robertson get a such a beautiful women
Page 15
Miss, not miss
comma after 'Robertson'
Wearing, not Waring.
revealing, not reveling.
Page 16
Hey there, not hey their.
Elena Nelson, a 21 year old hot piece of ass, not Elena Nelson.21 year's old hot peace of ass
brother-in-law, not brother in law
Page 17
heart, not hart
Ahem, not Aham
Page 18
peace of cake? Do you mean piece of ass?
I've never seen, not I never seen.
Page 19
it, not them.
feelings, not feeling's.
I've got to say, not I got a say.
mentioned, not mansion.
she has, not she have
Page 20
Here, not Her
addressed, not address
Oh, not Ow
It, not It's
job, not Job
attorney's, not attorney
A lawyer and a policeman, not Lawyer and a Policeman
I'd better, not I better
myself, not my self
Page 21
It's not the end of the world, not It's not the world end
So what are you waiting for, silly? not, So What are you waiting for find out...
finished, not finish
job, not Job
...what if I don't get it? not, ...what if I don't get it.
Page 22
good news, not a good news
Page 24
job, not Job
Congratulations, miss. See? I told you. not, Congratulations miss see I told you.
Page 25
news, mister postman, not, news mister postmen
Crack, not Crak
Almost every page
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Also, your description of this comic is:
Elena,young bright women who just become a lawyer.She,s going to start her curier path at district attorney office in Denose city while staying with her sister.
But it should be:
Elena is a bright, young woman who has just become a lawyer. She's going to start her career path at the district attorney's office in Denose city, while staying with her sister.